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Lisa!!!Was that you doing the voice over?Lettie!Good Stuff. The only thing I’d say... music could add a little more rhythm.Other than that the story is there, and the original language adds a nice touch. )))
yup lisa thanks for ur sexy voice :) yeah music was the hard part. D: i should hav been more prepared for that.
Lettie!Don't get me wrong!It's still very good!
I like it! I can imagine the kid struggling with the rice bag. I agree that the music could have more little something in it, but it gives a nice feeling to the story. And maybe that's why the ending is still a surprice.I like it!
Great use of sound! I really liked it. But even though I didn't understand the language, I think there could have been more contrasts in tone of voice.The story is really great, though! I'm impressed that you could fit such a good story into so little time.Despite the sad ending (that POOR CHICKEN!), this was fantastic Lettie! =)
PS:Sound could add to it, but I have to disagree and say that your animatic works very well without it. With the proper use of sound, you can get away with leaving out music. A lot of indie films do this.
Hey Lettie, glad to see this idea come to fruition. In my opinion, you pulled it off, everything reads for the most part. I have some suggestions, if you want to hear them we can go over them at school sometime. Nice work-Trev
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